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July 22, 2009

Message in the Bottle II


People had gone to the moon and Yet, we are still figuring out what to do" - quoted by mY sister

This one is simply a message in the bottle,
should I throw it in the ocean,
and you may find it sooner or later or never...
This is what I wrote...
  • You looked pale in the haze,
    because you are on the powdery sand in the breezy wind,
    You look forward to the blue sea, but home is cozy and greeny,
    the busy bee is what you are to settle the balanced life on the land,
  • You've been up to the sky for world throtting,
    you've settled your interest in the water world,
    Way in the beginning as I see,
    you've changed from baby to girly girl,
  • You loved the four legged boy, that's the Teddy,
    you loved the ocean, your neighbours are turtles or dolphins,
  • People loved the ocean but they don't have the gadget like you do,
    The first hand story from you will do enuf for them to sample the experience.
  • You may share it in written with the photos that you've taken,
    You were behind the picture that taken above,
    In the an open sea, beautiful straits, you find ocean is best to venture,
    some like the ocean afraid of the sun, some love the ocean and the sky above,
You are as the rest, haven't gone to the moon,
but you are living almost as high as the moon,
You've been so quiet, no update in your blog that down my interest in here,
How do I knock your door, hope this crooked poem may buzz ya, my sister :)

13 comments:

  1. omg.
    mine will be shorter :D

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  2. You are a delight, my girl. Ever since you left a comment on my blog I just can't wait to read your blog during the day. I come in and just get what you offer this 79 year old lady, a breath of fresh air and happiness. You are so pretty and a joy to hear from. Stay that wonderful person that I see that just gives out joy and happiness.

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  3. huhu... let's go to the moon.... together...

    Lovely poem... good to read, good to remember... make me smile...

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  4. Wow I am amazed. As a blogger-wanna-be :), words should come easy, but my wonderment is beyond words.

    Please keep on writing with or without me. I am proud of you. I am proud you are my sister.

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  5. Hi BabYpose, I agree with what the lovely Lucy said about you in her comment above 'Stay that wonderful person that I see that just gives out joy and happiness' your smile is beautiful, and so are you, xx.

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  6. Hi Chubskulit,
    Thank you and how's your little princess :)

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  7. Hi Faisal the brainy or the Brian, oops :0 thank you for being here.

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  8. zamspotte dearie, we aim the moon :)Thank you for visiting. you are welcome here again ;)

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  9. Hi Lucy, you are my inspiration, you just a young thing in writing and everything. What's left in the old life is just as new to you :)Thanks so much.

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  10. Hey there, youre proud of me, thank you thank you, I'm proud of you too, sis, kiss ya :)

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  11. Hi Unseen Rajasthan, Its nice to welcome you here, no game here :) How's the four legged boys and girls?:) Thank you for the compliments.

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